Sunday, March 8, 2015

paper

March 9, 2015
Kirsten Kaschock

The United States offers two main types of school for children under the age of 18, public and private schools. Personally, having gone to a private, all girls, school that required me to wear a uniform my whole life (14 years), I do not know much about public school. Private schools are known for their small classes, liberal arts education and high tuition costs, where as public schools are known for their large classes, bigger schools and basically, free tuition.
Ever since I can remember, my morning routine has been the same until this year. I recall me waking up, putting on my uniform and going to the Baldwin school in Bryn Mawr Pa. I loved everything about it. It was a place where judgments were thrown out the window and I did not need to worry about impressing anyone. I could simply be myself and focus solely on getting the best education possible, not what shoes looked nicer with my outfit.
My graduating class of 52 girls, or sisters as we called ourselves, was an extremely tight knit group of girls. We always sat, ate and hung out in first our freshman, then sophomore, then junior, and eventually senior lounge. The schooling I went through prepared me for college both academically and socially speaking. I was taught early on how to write all kinds of long and short papers as well as stories. I was taught time management and organization skills that I still use to this day. All of my teachers were very dedicated to their student’s success and the subject they were teaching. They were genuinely interested in the well being of their students and wanted them to succeed in every way possible. They were extremely skilled in their fields of learning, even though private schools do not require a teaching certification. I can honestly say that I had a great relationship with every one of my teachers. I still keep in contact with some of them today. Last week one of my favorite teachers, Mr. Kountz e-mailed me as well as my close friends asking us how we all were and to make sure that we all stop in to say hello during our spring breaks. Our small class sizes made way for very close student-teacher relationships; my biggest class being 16 girls. One of my fondest memories was when I was in 9th grade. I was not expecting the big change in work from middle school to upper school and I was falling behind in my math class. My teacher, Mrs. Loke noticed that I was not doing too well and pulled me aside after class one day. She spoke to me and we set up regular meeting times and soon enough I was back on track. Mrs. Loke could have just let me slip through the cracks, but instead showed how much she cared and helped me better myself. Although I am blindly because I never went to public school, and biased because I experienced so many great things, I would not change my years at Baldwin for anything. I believe any other schooling could come close to the experiences and memories I have from Baldwin. Baldwin taught me to be an independent, strong, confident, women. And, as you can see I can talk about Baldwin for hours.
Now, of course there are many different private schools, college prep day schools, boarding schools, military academies, special needs and art academies, but I will focus on college prep schools. These schools are highly selective and according to an article by greatschools.org, private schools are “by their very definition, selective. They are not obligated to accept every child, so getting admitted may involve in-depth applications with multiple interviews, essays, and testing.” Besides academics, private schools admit students based on their racial and religious backgrounds. Compared to public school, private schools are known for a great deal of things. Smaller class sizes where each student receives attention, large amount of extracurricular activities, high tuition, and most likely a uniform. According to an article in the New York Times, private schools “because of their low student-to-teacher ratios, can focus on each student’s specific needs, helping each child reach his or her potential.”
Public schools, on the other hand, open their doors to everyone who lives within a specific geographical boundary. Teachers that teach in public schools do have to in fact be certified and go through state training to be informed about teaching techniques. Unlike private schools, public schools do not cost any extra money to attend. According to the same article mentioned above by greatschool.org, public schools are “often underfunded operations influenced by political winds and shortfalls. Financed through federal, state, and local taxes, public school are a part of a larger school system, which functions as a part of the government and must follow the rules and regulations set by politicians.” Grade sizes and individual class sizes in public schools are generally bigger, making it hard for students to build good relationships with their teachers. Not all public schools have the means to help students that have special needs or learning disabilities making it hard for students who have these setbacks to flourish.
I organized an interview with one of my roommates, Jessica, and asked her questions about her experience attending public school throughout her life. I first asked her if going to a public high school was her choice and she responded “It was mine, my mom’s and my dad’s choice. I actually considered going to private school for high school but the public school in my area is very good academically so I did not feel the need to switch, pay thousands in tuition, and make new friends.” I listened as the conversation flowed to how many people were in her grade and individual classes and what the pros and cons were to having large classes. She answered “I had 270 people in my grade and there were anywhere from 24 to 30 people in my classes. The pros of having a large number of people in my grade were I would always have people to be with in class or outside of class and everyone lived near one another. The cons being, I didn’t know everyone in my grade personally.” I was curious to see if Jessica’s public school education prepared her for academics in college. She said that her school did not do a great job in this regard, “I took many free periods in the morning so I never had to wake up early for classes. I had never written more than a four-page paper in high school and now I have to write seven to eight pages papers and I find it very difficult.”
Working on this paper, doing research, and speaking with Jessica, have shown the similarities and differences between the two types of schooling. I learned a lot from my interview, as well as the research I did to prepare for it, and found it interesting to see a different side of the argument.


Work Cited

Anonymous. Private Schools: Exceptional Education. New York Times Magazine Oct 09 2005: 74. ProQuest. 26 Jan. 2015.

Findings in Economic Research Reported from Colgate University (The Effect of Private High School Education on the College Trajectory). VerticalNews.com Dec 31, 2014. Education Letter.

Patrick J. Wolf. Comparing Public Schools to Private. Education Next. July 1, 2014. Vol. 14 Issue 3, p52-54. 3p.

GreatSchools Staff. Private Versus Public. GreatSchools: Greatschools.org 1998-2015 
Guarino, Jessica. Personal interview. January 2015.


Read and Response

Read and Response

Week Five

Even though I did not directly mention stereotypes in my identity paper, I do believe that there are. Having gone to private school my whole life, I have just about heard all of the stereotypes possible about it. Although I think people should not stereotype I always look past it because I know what people are saying is not true. I really enjoyed reading the second article I thought the story was very interesting to read about. I believe that everyone in the world is very interested, too interested in what other people think about them or what other people think about what they are doing. I think everyone needs to calm down and focus on making him or herself happy and stop trying to only please others. 

Week Six

Part 1.
I have always had trouble with writing and grammar. When and where to put commas, colons and comma slices have always confused me. So after reading through all of the twenty tabs I was not surprised with some of the ones that I identify with. After reading through my first three paragraphs of my paper I realized that I was missing commas after some of the introductory elements. I also did not put commas into a lot of my sentences but instead broke them a part making my paper sound more choppy than necessary. Sometimes I when I write and re read my papers I go through it so quickly that I forget and read over silly mistakes like the wrong verb tense. All of my paper will be written in the past tense and then all of the sudden there is a present tense verb thrown in there. I also get "its and it's" confused a lot as well. 
Part 2.
I enjoyed watching this video. I found it very interesting. This video relates to the process in which some of us wrote our papers because in a lot of them we needed to "step outside ourselves" and write about something that we were not familiar with. We had to write about other people and their cultures. 

Week Seven

Justin, 
I really enjoyed your intro paragraph. I thought It gave a lot of detail, but not too much detail and I believe it is a good opening to the rest of your paper. As Jake already mentioned it would be a good idea to maybe talk to one or two other people and get their views as well so you could talk about move views other than just your fathers'. You did a good job explaining the questions you asked your father as well as the discussion you both had. 

Jake,
I enjoyed your into paragraph and I believe it is a good start and opening to your paper. However I think there may be a couple grammatical errors. "These religious groups have made the assumption that intermarriages has resulted in a smaller amount of practicing followers each year." I believe it should be... These religious groups have made the assumptions that intermarriages have resulted in a smaller amount of practicing followers each year. For the second quote in the second paragraph I'm not sure if this is necessary but you may want to say where Gene Demby is writing from like the New York Times etc. I think it'd be great to include a little more of what your grandfather had to say back to the interview questions you asked him. I am Jewish and I really enjoy reading more about the culture so this paper was very interesting to me. My mother, not so much my father but my mother and her whole side of the family has always told my brother and I as well as the other kids in the family that we have to marry other Jewish people. That is what I have always grown up with so this paper was very interesting to read. 

Week 8

Karen Swallow Prior argument is that reading makes people more relatable to one another. She makes her argument by citing many other people with quotes that they have said. The sources that she used and cited all helped make her point. She used quotes from articles in the New York Times as well as Time, essays, and studies. All of the sources she used in her article had the hyperlink there to make everything clear to the reader. I really enjoyed when Prior said, "Reading is one of the few distinctively human activities that set us apart from the rest of the animal kingdom." I actually really enjoyed that whole paragraph. I think what she said here is very true. Prior discussed how reading "must be taught" and that it "might be considered one of the most spiritual of all human activities." I think Prior did a great job introducing all of her sources and describing all of the quotes she put into her article. In comparison to the article we read in class last week by Said, I think that Prior did a better job at making her argument clear to the reader. I found it a little difficult to understand fully what Said was saying throughout his article as well as what he was actually arguing. Prior explained everything she was saying and I found her argument clear to define while reading. 


Prompts

Prompts

Week Five
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You are in the car waiting in line, watching the crowds of girls walk up the stairs and up the grass into the building that looks like a castle or Hogwarts, scared, nervous, and excited. You are happy to be back at the place you have spent almost your whole life at and to see the people you have spent that time with. You are excited to go back to your everyday routine. Happy to put your uniform back on. Although going here is old, this next step is something new, a big change. 
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You are the youngest one again. You have so much more freedom and not nearly as many rules as you have had previously. You get a choice of the classes you can take. You are scared, nervous, and excited. 
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When you arrive you see familiar faces mixed with a bunch of scared and unfamiliar faces. You are scared, nervous and excited for those new people. Your teachers will be warm and happy to meet you but will give you much more responsibility that you have had in the past. 
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When an unfamiliar face asks you to help her out you welcome her warmly and bond about first day gitters. She is lost and very confused about where everything in this only building with new features inside of it. 
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You are about to start class with a teacher you have always seen walking around in the hallways and in the cafeteria but have never met and never thought you would ever be old enough to be sitting in her class. You are scared, nervous, and excited. 
/

Week Six

file:///Users/ryanmorgan/Downloads/private%20vs%20public.pdf

Week Seven

I was asked to re read my whole paper and look for grammatical errors. 
The United States offers two main types of school for children under the age of 18, public and private schools. Personally, having gone to a private, all girls, school that required me to wear a uniform my whole life (14 years), I do not know much about public school. Private schools are known for their small classes, liberal arts education and high tuition costs, where as public schools are known for their large classes, bigger schools and basically, free tuition.
Ever since I can remember, my morning routine has been the same until this year. I recall me waking up, putting on my uniform and going to the Baldwin school. I loved everything about it. It was a place where judgments were thrown out the window and I did not need to worry about impressing anyone. I could simply be myself and focus solely on getting the best education possible, not what shoes looked nicer with my outfit.
My graduating class of 52 girls, or sisters as we called ourselves, was an extremely tight knit group. The schooling I went through prepared me for college both academically and socially speaking. All of my teachers were very dedicated to their student’s success and the subject they were teaching. They were genuinely interested in the well being of their students and wanted them to succeed in every way possible. They were extremely skilled in their fields of learning, even though private schools do not require a teaching certification. I can honestly say that I had a great relationship with every one of my teachers. Our small class sizes made way for very close student-teacher relationships; my biggest class being 16 girls. Although I am blindly because I never went to public school, and biased because I experienced so many great things, I would not change my years at Baldwin for anything. I believe any other schooling could come close to the experiences and memories I have from Baldwin. Baldwin taught me to be an independent, strong, confident, women. And, as you can see I can talk about Baldwin for hours.
Now, of course there are many different private schools, college prep day schools, boarding schools, military academies, special needs and art academies, but I will focus on college prep schools. These schools are highly selective and according to an article by greatschools.org, private schools are “by their very definition, selective. They are not obligated to accept every child, so getting admitted may involve in-depth applications with multiple interviews, essays, and testing.” Besides academics, private schools admit students based on their racial and religious backgrounds. Compared to public school, private schools are known for a great deal of things. Smaller class sizes where each student receives attention, large amount of extracurricular activities, high tuition, and most likely a uniform. According to an article in the New York Times, private schools “because of their low student-to-teacher ratios, can focus on each student’s specific needs, helping each child reach his or her potential.”
Public schools, on the other hand, open their doors to everyone who lives within a specific geographical boundary. Teachers that teach in public schools do have to in fact be certified and go through state training to be informed about teaching techniques. Unlike private schools, public schools do not cost any extra money to attend. According to the same article mentioned above by greatschool.org, public schools are “often underfunded operations influenced by political winds and shortfalls. Financed through federal, state, and local taxes, public school are a part of a larger school system, which functions as a part of the government and must follow the rules and regulations set by politicians.” Grade sizes and individual class sizes in public schools are generally bigger, making it hard for students to build good relationships with their teachers. Not all public schools have the means to help students that have special needs or learning disabilities making it hard for students who have these setbacks to flourish.
I organized an interview with one of my roommates, Jessica, and asked her questions about her experience attending public school throughout her life. I first asked her if going to a public high school was her choice and she responded “It was mine, my mom’s and my dad’s choice. I actually considered going to private school for high school but the public school in my area is very good academically so I did not feel the need to switch, pay thousands in tuition, and make new friends.” I listened as the conversation flowed to how many people were in her grade and individual classes and what the pros and cons were to having large classes. She answered “I had 270 people in my grade and there were anywhere from 24 to 30 people in my classes. The pros of having a large number of people in my grade were I would always have people to be with in class or outside of class and everyone lived near one another. The cons being, I didn’t know everyone in my grade personally.” I was curious to see if Jessica’s public school education prepared her for academics in college. She said that her school did not do a great job in this regard, “I took many free periods in the morning so I never had to wake up early for classes. I had never written more than a four-page paper in high school and now I have to write seven to eight pages papers and I find it very difficult.”

Working on this paper, doing research, and speaking with Jessica, have shown the similarities and differences between the two types of schooling. I learned a lot from my interview, as well as the research I did to prepare for it, and found it interesting to see a different side of the argument.

Read and Response to Peers

Read and Response to Peers

Week Five

Nick,
I like how you did not just talk about older kids in school but you also incorporated younger children as well (kindergarten). I like how you went back and fourth between the two as well. You went from older kids with new technology and speaking in a more grown up manner to younger children playing with toys on the playground and their spider man backpacks. 

Jake, 
I enjoyed reading this because I am too Jewish and this really relates to me as well as I believe it is very accurate. Although I would only attend synagogue on the high holidays as well as Bar and Bat Mitzvahs it is good that you are very dedicated to your religion. This is very much like your paper as well as your thesis and I believe you did a very good job constructing your prose. 

Justin, 
I like how each paragraph is a different thing that happens when stereotyping the Jewish religion or just about the Jewish religion in general. I too am Jewish and have hears the term "JAP" many many times and also wonder why that type of person is just automatically thought of as Jewish. It does not make much sense to me. 'Oy gevalt" as well as "shlep" are also used in my house but mostly only when my grandmother is in town. To me those things are regular to me and I forget that others, like my friends do not know the meanings. So when they come over they always look confused when those things are said. 

Week Six

Nick,
When looking at the pictures you chose I am confused but also have somewhat of an idea of what your paper is about. There is a mix of different things on this paper but I can tell that it has something to do with being loud and out there. There is nothing dull about your paper and the items you chose to put in this really represent that. I was very clear with the pictures I chose. I like how you were not as clear and made this more mysterious.

Parth,

I like the pictures you chose. When I first look at them it makes me think of new beginnings and a fresh start. It is clear to me when looking at these pictures what your topic is or an idea of what your topic is for your paper. I really enjoy the quote you used as well. I do remember what the topic for your paper is from a previous assignment and I believe this goes along perfectly with it. 

Week Seven

Justin,

Although you did not add an additional interview I believe you have made really good improvements in your paper. I believe with the corrections you made your paper moves in an easier way and allows the reader to get a better understanding of what your paper is all about. 

Jake, 
Right away I believed this interview would be a great addition to your argument. Andrew is a perfect candidate for your argument, being raised in a Jewish and religious household and having his parents wanting him to marry a Jewish girl but ends up marrying a catholic girl. 

Week Eight

Jake,

I agree that the way that Prior presents her citations makes the essay more fluent. I enjoyed reading the essay and not having to wait until the end or scroll all the way down to see a source. I think this made the essay flow nicely and made it more easy to read. Although I disagree that Prior's piece was a better argument than Said's, I do think that you made some good arguments for why Prior's was better. Said's piece was challenging to read, but I could understand most of it even before the analysis. As you pointed out, Prior used a lot of research to get her point across. Her piece relied much more on ethos and logos than Said's.

Justin, 
You are correct; well I believe you are correct when you said that you think Prior's argument is that reading makes people more relatable. I think by her adding in the hyperlinks to the sources she cited allowed her readers to feel more informed and made them understand what she was saying easier. I too like the idea she mentioned about putting someone in someone else's shoes. This allows people to see how others view the world around them.